Script
Daniel: It's cold in here.
Ayush: Shall we go in?
Yohei: Do you have the touch?
Ayush: Here.
Daniel: OK. Let's go
-Door opens with squeaking sound-
Yohei: What's this?
Daniel: Looks like a painting?
-All explore the house-
Ayush: Oh, there is a bathroom.
-Ayush goes in and fix his hair-
Daniel: Oh my god. He is doing the hair again.
Ayush: Wait, there's something wrong with this mirror.
Daniel: What?
-Daniel goes in front of the mirror and moves arms randomly and Kabir (Daniel in the mirror) synchronizes simultaneously.
Daniel: See? There's nothing wrong with the mirror man.
-Daniel turns around and walk towards the exit of the bathroom.
Ayush: Daniel! Look at the mirror!
-Kabir(Daniel in the mirror) stares at Daniel-
Daniel: What!?
-Daniels turns around again and look in the mirror and checks that there's nothing wrong-
Daniel & Yohei: Are you OK ayush?
-Ayush is possessed and frozen-
Yohei: Hey, Ayush. -Touching Ayush's shoulder.
-Yohei also gets possessed and freezes-
Daniel: Ah, Guys? -Looking at Ayush and Yohei-
-Daniel looks back at the mirror and find himself(Kabir) going out of the mirror-
Daniel: What the... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
-Daniel runs away from himself, Ayush and Yohei and as they touch him, he also gets possessed.
-End-
Reflection:
I believe that the script and the concept were appropriate for the horror though the character should have described the house more and create the tension. If we can do the scene again, I will add more length in the scene when Daniel explores the mirror. For example, it would be good idea if Kabir stops coping Daniel's motion after he copied several times and Daniel gets puzzled and turns around after saying "See? There's nothing wrong."
Daniel: It's cold in here.
Ayush: Shall we go in?
Yohei: Do you have the touch?
Ayush: Here.
Daniel: OK. Let's go
-Door opens with squeaking sound-
Yohei: What's this?
Daniel: Looks like a painting?
-All explore the house-
Ayush: Oh, there is a bathroom.
-Ayush goes in and fix his hair-
Daniel: Oh my god. He is doing the hair again.
Ayush: Wait, there's something wrong with this mirror.
Daniel: What?
-Daniel goes in front of the mirror and moves arms randomly and Kabir (Daniel in the mirror) synchronizes simultaneously.
Daniel: See? There's nothing wrong with the mirror man.
-Daniel turns around and walk towards the exit of the bathroom.
Ayush: Daniel! Look at the mirror!
-Kabir(Daniel in the mirror) stares at Daniel-
Daniel: What!?
-Daniels turns around again and look in the mirror and checks that there's nothing wrong-
Daniel & Yohei: Are you OK ayush?
-Ayush is possessed and frozen-
Yohei: Hey, Ayush. -Touching Ayush's shoulder.
-Yohei also gets possessed and freezes-
Daniel: Ah, Guys? -Looking at Ayush and Yohei-
-Daniel looks back at the mirror and find himself(Kabir) going out of the mirror-
Daniel: What the... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
-Daniel runs away from himself, Ayush and Yohei and as they touch him, he also gets possessed.
-End-
Reflection:
I believe that the script and the concept were appropriate for the horror though the character should have described the house more and create the tension. If we can do the scene again, I will add more length in the scene when Daniel explores the mirror. For example, it would be good idea if Kabir stops coping Daniel's motion after he copied several times and Daniel gets puzzled and turns around after saying "See? There's nothing wrong."
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